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个人收藏该文的朋友们都是会考試成功！关注点赞的盆友都高分数根据！文中为我学习培训雅思写作的精粹汇总系列产品的第三篇——大作文之说明文创作。系列产品中别的文章内容请阅览栏目查询，或立即点一下下列连接：这也是归纳梳理了我学习培训学为贵雅思创作课程内容时的手记，肯定好用干货知识！是可以总体提升对雅思写作认知能力的那类干货知识！艰辛分类整理，不求回报共享，感觉有效一定要个人收藏、关注点赞！感谢！1.1 5.5分写作共性问题1.2 说明文题型特性及创作架构1.3 大作文备考提议----------------文章正文-----------------1、语法错误2、措辞的情境不对：好事情造成/产生了：give rise to/give birth toeg. Modern technology has given rise to a convenient life for us.坏事儿造成/产生了: cause/lead to3、逻辑问题：句内逻辑性：Its obviously that.../Clearly,.../It is generally believe that...后边应当加的是social given（既定事实），后边不能加主观性的思想观点eg. Its obviously that many college graduates cannot find an ideal job after graduation.（这也是既定事实，才可以用这一句式）句外逻辑性：全篇的谋篇布局，句与句相互关系举例说明：为何大家对basic science（基础科学）不高度重视：1、学习培训较为艰难，必须对一些theory的了解，尤其抽象性（abstract），即真的很难学不明白2、感觉学了没有用，消耗时间（time-consuming）解决方案：

1、院校里应当鼓励学习基础科学，知其然还能知其所以然（we should know things not just for its own sake）2、社会发展应积极主动宣传策划好的配搭：anti-social behavior：反社会个人行为lack of respect to others：对别人缺乏重视perform the everyday tasks：进行每一天的每日任务fulfill the impossible tasks：进行不可能的任务开始段：首句（环境句最重要）首句背景详细介绍要怎么写：逆考虑上来，沿着写下来先寻找问题中的关键字，把关键词看作下意词，往上想双层eg. mobile phones逆考虑上来：mobile phones→上一级是于电子设备或高新科技物质（technological outcomes/electronic products）→上一级是科技的发展沿着写下来：现阶段社會的科技大发展趋势，生活中发生了许多高科技产品和电子器件物质，主要包括手机上。The new century has got hold of the testimony(印证) for the boom of science and technology(第一级), which give rise to a set of technological products（第二级）, including mobile phones（第三级，题型关键字）.Problem Statement（第二句话，问题的引出）：最先要有对接词：Based on such phenomenon(根据上述事实), ...Under such circumstance, ...随后是问题的引出：Increasing people are in deep concern about...Much attention is given to the problem that...Initial claim(第三句话，个人见解)：As for me, A and B are supposed to take responsibility for...eg. As for me, both government and individuals are supposed to take responsibility for water deficiency.(水资源短缺)开始段例题：（50-70个英语单词 ）题型：新闻媒体中曝出灾祸和暴力行为的信息内容比较多，为何，早已如何解决？逆推：灾祸和暴力行为的信息内容→积极主动和消沉的信息内容→各式各样的新闻报道和影象→大众媒体的发展趋势首句环境引进：Currently, the public media is being reformed in various ways, which increasingly enables its audiences to see news and images in all forms, including both positive or negative ones.问题引进：Based on such phenomenon, people are in deep concern about the flooding images of disasters and violence on TV, in newspapers or even from the Internet.

个人见解：As for me, governments and the masses should primarily be responsible for this modern problem.通用性社会热点问题的缘故：社会道德管理体系不健全法纪监管不成熟政府部门监管无幅度新式技术性大提高生活的节奏越迅速2个化过程过快（过多都市化和过多经济全球化）大家观念为压根考试真题案例：1、当代夫妇为什么晚些才要小baby?思想意识 日常生活快节奏2、为什么社会发展暴力行为矛盾愈来愈多？社会道德水准降低 法纪监管不成熟3、文化入侵（语言表达绝种）为什么发生？经济全球化 政府部门监管不紧，不高度重视这个问题4、空气污染为何越来越严重？思想观念没高度重视 经济全球化解决方法（solutions）：(1)It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation.(2)Hence, it is imperative for us to take drastic steps.(3)We should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to control this problem.(4)We should enhance/cultivate the awareness of people that this issue is vital for us. (5)Only in this way can we solve the problem.(6)I believe we humans can overcome this difficulty through some specific solutions and make a dent on this issue.实际的解决方案：公私融合功效好公：government/authorities and organizations(单位和组织)私：individuals（观念优先，行動重要紧跟）/big companies/economies（大财团）末尾段：汇总缘故和解决方法According to the aforementioned factors（以上缘故）, the reasons leading to  主题风格问题 are multiple and complex, which is totally from the perspective of A and B（A和B2个层面 eg. 文化教育和经济发展层面）. Practically, this problem can be solved if people lay more emphasis on …, … and … . I believe that the above possible proposals can finally …and tackle this modern-day scourge（当代难点）.键入：1）基本语汇和正宗表述：看全能构思和配搭6分：英语的语法不必产生过多的问题，观念一切正常，沒有跑题偏题6.5分：句式丰富多彩一些7分：语汇的熟练掌握，正宗表述7分以上：思想觉悟

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